Chapter 3
The Service Elevator
By six that evening your apartment has new locks, a new door code, a motion sensor on the balcony slider and a woman on your couch.
Not on it, exactly. Morgan has turned it. That's the first crime. Your couch has faced the window for three years so you can watch the bay go from silver to black, and now it faces the front door, like the door is the view.
"You moved my couch."
"I moved your couch." She's sitting on the arm with a laptop, typing with two fingers, fast. "Sight line."
"The sight line was the ocean."
"The ocean isn't going to come through your door."
"You don't know that. It's hurricane season."
She doesn't look up, but the corner of her mouth moves. It's gone so fast you might have imagined it.
The day has been long and bureaucratic and humiliating. A Halyard tech with a beard and a toolbox changed the locks while two Miami police officers took a report about the container seal and asked you, twice, whether you'd given anyone a key. A building manager apologized eleven times. The full technical sweep, cameras and bugs and whatever else lives in walls, can't happen until Thursday, because the only guy Morgan trusts to do it is in Orlando. Your mother called four times. You answered once, to say you were alive, and hung up before she could say anything that sounded like love but felt like a leash.
And Morgan has been everywhere. In your kitchen. In your hallway. Standing outside the bathroom door while you showered and shaved, which she announced first, flatly, I'll be in the hall, as if that made it normal.
You've lived alone since you were twenty-two. You had forgotten what it's like to hear someone else breathing in your home.
"How long?" you ask.
"How long what?"
"How long are you going to be here?"
"Until your mother testifies. Six weeks, maybe longer if they postpone." She finally glances up. In the lamp light her eyes are dark, gold at the center, the kind of eyes you'd spend a whole roll of film trying to get right. You hate that you notice. "You can make it easier or harder. It doesn't change the timeline."
"I'm opening Low Tide tonight."
"No, you're not."
"Simone's opening it. I'm going to it."
"Somebody cut your power last night, Ethan." She says your name the way she'd read a license plate. "Fire marshal says the main breaker was thrown by hand. Somebody walked into your electrical room, flipped your bar into the dark and walked out. Until I know who, you're not standing on a roof with three hundred strangers."
"So I'm a prisoner."
"You're a principal."
"What's the difference?"
"A prisoner can't leave." She closes the laptop. "You can. I just come with you. That's the deal I told you this morning."
"And tonight you're saying no."
"Tonight I'm saying it's a bad idea. You asked." She stands, stretches her neck until it cracks. She's taller than you thought, nearly up to your eyes, and she moves like nothing in her body has ever been wasted. "I'm going to check the stairwells. Ten minutes."
She goes. The door clicks. The new lock beeps.
You stand in your own living room, facing the wrong way.
Here's the thing about growing up a Prado. You learn every exit. Not because someone teaches you. Because every adult in your life is reporting back to Celia, and if you want one single unwatched hour, you find the way out they haven't thought of.
The Marlow has a service elevator behind the trash room. It opens into the loading dock. The loading dock opens onto a side street. The side street is four blocks from Low Tide.
You're in the elevator in ninety seconds. Hoodie up. Phone in your pocket. Heart going like you're sixteen.
Low Tide is half full and humming. Simone has put candles on every table because she doesn't trust the lights anymore, and the roof looks like a church that serves mezcal. The bay is black glass. The city is gold.
"You're here," Simone says, and then, lower, "you're alone?"
"I'm free."
"You're an idiot." But she hugs you, hard, up on her toes, and smells like lime and smoke. "Where's the bodyguard?"
"Checking stairwells."
"Our stairwells?"
"Mine. At the Marlow."
Simone looks over your shoulder toward the bar. Her face goes through surprise, and then something like delight.
"Babe," she says. "I don't think so."
You turn around.
Morgan Reyes is sitting at the far end of your bar. Back to the wall. One knee up on the rung of the stool. In front of her, a glass of soda water with a lime in it, sweating a ring onto the wood. Two women at the next stool are very obviously trying to work up the nerve to talk to her. The bartender, Hector, who has never in his life rushed for anyone, is hovering nearby with a fresh lime like an offering.
She lifts her glass to you an inch.
You walk over because there's nothing else to do.
"How," you say.
"You took the service elevator." She squeezes the lime. "Everyone takes the service elevator."
"You said you were checking the stairwells."
"I was. Then I checked the service elevator. It was moving." She sips. "You've got a nice place here. The candles are a good idea. Your bartender's very attentive."
Hector flees.
"You're not mad," you say.
"Should I be?"
"I lied to you."
"You didn't, actually. You didn't say anything." She studies you over the glass. "You wanted to find out if I'd stop you. I won't. I told you that. I'll just be here."
You hate how reasonable it sounds. You hate even more that your shoulders have come down half an inch since you saw her, that the knot under your ribs from the photo, the seal, the pillow, has loosened just by knowing where she is.
"I'm staying until close," you say.
"Copy, Ethan."
"That's two hours."
"I've done longer in worse chairs."
So you stay. You work. You run the register when Hector takes his break and you comp a drink for a couple celebrating their tenth anniversary and you spend ten minutes on the stairs with your newest barback, a skinny kid named Nando who is crying because his landlord raised his rent, and you give him the name of a lawyer and the rest of your tips. When you look up, Morgan is watching you. Not the exits. You.
She looks away first.
At two, she walks you home. Down Brickell Avenue, under the dripping palms, her a half step behind and to the left, close enough that the back of her hand almost brushes yours twice. She doesn't lecture. She doesn't say I told you so. She just walks, scanning the street, the parked cars, the dark doorways, and at the Marlow she nods to Esteban, who stands up straighter.
Upstairs she checks every room before she lets you in. Then she sits back down on the couch that faces the wrong way.
"Goodnight, Prado," she says.
You go to bed angry and can't figure out at whom.
You're lying there at 2:14, staring at your ceiling, when your phone lights up on the nightstand.
Unknown number.
Your heart stops. Then you read the first line, and it starts again, for a completely different reason.
This is my number. Save it.
Your love interest is about to text you.
Start free to answer at the cliffhanger. Your replies change what happens next, and your name goes into the story.
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